Quote Originally Posted by S_B View Post
This is spot on...Jack I've read this before and again today. And while I think overall you've hit the nail on the head and I can mostly agree. I think your use of derogatory statements, like "stupid humans", "sub-human", "tree huggers", "sissy's", and "grotesquely-fat", while being passionate writing is only going to lose readers you need to target.

Everyone ~ April 8th, 2014 is tomorrow!! http://www.thepitbullbible.com/forum...April-8th-2014

Thank you for your critique ... I will amend accordingly later today, because you're right.

Cheers,

Jack